No heaven, no hell

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Note: This is not intended to be a biblically accurate account of the existence of heaven or hell. It’s just a story. Or a poem. Or whatever.

Two brothers
Sons of a preacher
raised to believe
there’s more to this life
than time spent on earth

One questioned his faith
cultivated his seeds of doubt
and at times chose paths
unworthy of a preacher’s son

One never wavered
stayed close to home
clung to the safety
of his father’s faith

Both were visited
by an angel
with a message from God
he said,

God knows the number of hairs of your head
and the number of days you have left on this earth.

Both replied,

We know this to be true. The Word of God tells us as much.

The angel then said,

The message God has sent me to deliver is this:
There is nothing else beyond this earth.
No heaven
No hell
The earth you walk upon encompasses both
and you choose which you will inhabit;
which path you choose to journey upon.
When you draw your last breath
your journey will come to an end.
No bright light at the end of a tunnel.
No fiery pit to suffer for all eternity.
There is no eternity
Only now.

The brothers spoke to one another
about this messenger from God
One was relieved
the other angry

I’ve spent my whole life depriving myself
of the things you’ve indulged in.
I’ve missed so many experiences
in lieu of heaven.
Now I am told there is nothing
beyond this world?
I’ve much catching up to do.

And so he did.

The other brother
who had questioned his faith
knew that what his brother had missed out on
didn’t amount to much.
And he heeded the angel’s words
about which path he would choose.
Heaven or Hell was a choice he could make.
He’d glimpsed at Hell.
He decided to give Heaven a shot.

And so he did.

He died to himself
Spent his days serving God by serving others
Not out of obligation
or the promise of Heaven
but out of Love
and he caught glimpses of Heaven
everywhere he looked.

Years later…

The brothers meet again
in a homeless shelter
one serving food
the other being served
and they talked about
the visiting angel

Do you still believe what the angel said?
About no Heaven or Hell?
After death there is nothing?,

asked the homeless brother.

Yes and no,
the other brother replied.
I believe we begin to live eternity here on earth,
but after that visit I began to search the scriptures.
I believe what God’s word says.
Not the angel.
I also believe that you’ve been given a glimpse of Hell
in order to understand the gift of Heaven.
A gift you felt entitled to as a birthright.
I hope you understand now the gift you chose to refuse
and know it is still being offered.

I think I do understand now, brother.
I don’t want to choose Hell anymore.
I choose Life.

Just then the brother felt a weight fall from his shoulder
Both brothers turned towards the sound of shreiking.
The angel who had been watching them all these years
was enraged that Hell would have one less resident.

As he flew away
both brothers remarked
How neither had noticed
the black wings
and singed robes before.

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24 Responses to “No heaven, no hell”

  1. Jim H August 3, 2011 at 8:04 pm #

    yes. yes. yes. It is amazing the lying voices we listen to when we have already heard the Voice of Truth. Love your insight here, Kathy!

  2. James Williams August 3, 2011 at 9:19 pm #

    Dang that’s good!

  3. jake August 3, 2011 at 9:54 pm #

    COULDN’T THEY SMELL BURNT HAIR?!!! Just kidding. I love this. I think it’s fascinating when we think about what it means to serve ourselves or God. There’s so much joy in serving the Lord, but dying to yourself totally sucks. Or so it seems… I’m still digesting this. I think there’s a lot to consider

  4. Larry Hehn August 3, 2011 at 10:25 pm #

    Brilliant!

  5. Jason August 3, 2011 at 10:29 pm #

    This is good. REALLY good.

    One of those posts that leave me sitting here saying “wow…wow…wow…”

  6. Candy August 4, 2011 at 12:10 am #

    You had me all deepdish katdished – until read Jake’s comment!

    “…you’ve been given a glimpse of Hell in order to understand the gift of Heaven.” We should all be so humble to acknowledge this. Love it.

  7. Hazel Moon August 4, 2011 at 1:29 am #

    Great poem (story) and as we are outside looking in, we know that even an angel can bring another Gospel that looks good, but does not agree with the Bible.

  8. sapir August 4, 2011 at 7:16 am #

    remineds me the song “imagine” 🙂

  9. Sarah August 4, 2011 at 7:36 am #

    This is absolutely fantastic. I’m going to share it with people. You wrote something very beautiful here!

  10. Jenny August 4, 2011 at 8:02 am #

    This.Is.Fantastic!

    Love this Kat!

  11. Megan Willome August 4, 2011 at 8:43 am #

    This is GREAT! Like a myth!

  12. Jonathan B August 4, 2011 at 12:50 pm #

    Very good, Kat. This reminds me, particular the ending part, of Frank Peretti’s angels and demons from This Present Darkness and Piercing the Darkness.

  13. Helen August 4, 2011 at 1:13 pm #

    A story (or poem) well told!

  14. Jason Stasyszen August 4, 2011 at 1:29 pm #

    Good stuff, Kat. Reminds me of what Paul said, that even if an angel came to tell you any other gospel besides the one we preached to you, don’t listen. It also shows that when we’re looking for an excuse to bail, we’ll take it whether we think it’s sound or not. Great story. Thanks.

  15. SethC August 4, 2011 at 1:37 pm #

    Great post. Beautiful story.

  16. Alyssa August 4, 2011 at 1:45 pm #

    Excellent portrayal of how a small suggestion from the enemy kicks open the door to a life lived for self and the justifications that frame it! Excellent- I’ll be sharing this with my teenage kids!

  17. Simply Darlene August 4, 2011 at 2:19 pm #

    Good night, Irene, this is grand stuff. The writing, the message, the story… What else have you got for us?

    Blessings.

  18. floyd August 4, 2011 at 2:20 pm #

    Oh man… That was a powerful reminder that God speaks to us through His word. If it doesn’t square with Him, it is a lie. Isn’t that exactly the biggest problem in our society and church right now? People following liars when the Truth has always been with us. We fall prey to laziness instead of seeking the truth.

    First Rate! Would I love to see this turned into a movie! I think you should start writing now! This would be EPIC!!!

  19. Anita August 5, 2011 at 11:04 am #

    Hi Kat, such a beautiful story. Thanks for sharing.
    and happy birthday by the way 🙂
    I’ll be visiting your blog again,
    Anita

  20. Pat Bowling August 5, 2011 at 12:43 pm #

    Love, love, love this!!!!

  21. April August 5, 2011 at 12:47 pm #

    Lucifer’s name means angel of light. He was the most beautiful angel God created. That is why it is so easy for us to fall for his lies. This is a great poem!

  22. Lainie Gallagher August 5, 2011 at 4:40 pm #

    I like this! 😀

  23. hannamay August 21, 2011 at 9:04 pm #

    Whooooaaa…two thumbs for you:):)LIKE it…

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